Question

18．本周，你們班來了位外籍教師Margaret．假如你是李明，請用英語給Margaret寫一封信，描述你們班英語學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)狀并表達(dá)你的愿望．

Present situation	Your hope
a lot of written work too much Chinese too much grammar …	more activities practice speaking English Learn English songs …

注意：（1）表格中的內(nèi)容僅供參考，允許自由發(fā)揮
（2）信的格式及首尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（3）詞數(shù)：80～100．
Dear Margaret，
I am Li Ming，a student in the class．I am writing to tell you about our English learning．At present，we have a lot of written work to do．Also，we speak too much Chinesein class，which doesn't help a lot．And we are learning too much grammar．It's just difficult and boring．Besides，we don t like copying texts，either．So 1 hope in your class，we can have more activities like discussion or role playing．Don't you think they will help to practice speaking English？And we'll be happy if we can learn some English songs or watch English movies．
Looking forward to a big change in our class．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是給外籍教師寫信描述你們班英語學(xué)習(xí)的現(xiàn)狀并表達(dá)你的愿望．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1現(xiàn)狀：太多書面作業(yè)，說太多的中文，學(xué)太多的語法…
2期望：很多課堂活動(dòng)，練習(xí)口語，學(xué)英文歌…
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
too much太多
besides 另外
help to do sth幫助做某事
practice doing sth練習(xí)做某事

高分句型：
1．Also，we speak too much Chinese in class，which doesn't help a lot．
which doesn't help a lot非限制性定語從句，修飾前面的整個(gè)句子．
2．①Don't you think ②they will ③help to ④practice speaking English？
①反問的語氣，實(shí)際上是希望回答的一方與問話方有同樣的觀點(diǎn)．
②省略了that的賓語從句，作為think的賓語
③help to do sth幫助做某事
④practice doing sth練習(xí)做某事

解答 Dear Margaret，
I am Li Ming，a student in the class．I am writing to tell you about our English learning．（點(diǎn)明主旨）At present，we have a lot of written work to do．Also，we speak too much Chinese in class，which doesn't help a lot．（高分句型）And we are learning too much grammar．It's just difficult and boring．Besides，we don't like copying texts，either．（現(xiàn)狀）So 1 hope in your class，we can have more activities like discussion or role playing．Don't you think they will help to practice speaking English？（高分句型）And we'll be happy if we can learn some English songs or watch English movies．（期望）
Looking forward to a big change in our class．（結(jié)束語）
Yours．
Li Ming

點(diǎn)評 本圖表所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來．動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并需有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．要注意句式的多樣性，適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂觅e語從句，轉(zhuǎn)折詞however，連詞and等．考生可在作文之前對每部分列出大致的提綱，做到主題明確，條理清楚．可以根據(jù)所給提綱或已知信息列出每段的主題句，為全文的展開做好鋪墊．注意行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范，不要出現(xiàn)一些諸如語法或詞匯的錯(cuò)誤．