Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)下面的提示用英文寫一篇80字左右的短文，題目為“My best friend---Lucy”。

1.Lucy是我最好的朋友，圓臉，笑瞇瞇的大眼睛；

2.很有耐心，經(jīng)常關(guān)心他人，從不說別人的壞話；

3.有一副好嗓子，在一次唱歌比賽中唱得最好；

3.理想中的學(xué)校每天上午9點(diǎn)開始上課，下午3:30放學(xué) ；

4.只有1小時(shí)的回家作業(yè)；有足夠的時(shí)間進(jìn)行課外活動(dòng)；

5.她希望……

注意點(diǎn)：

1．介紹須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

2．第5要點(diǎn)須補(bǔ)充完整。

My best friend---Lucy

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請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，寫一篇短文，意思通順。Lucy是我最好的朋友，看起來很惹人喜愛。上個(gè)月，她參加了DIY方面的課程，擅長做水果沙拉。經(jīng)常關(guān)心他人，從不說別人的壞話。她有一副好嗓子，長大后想成為一名杰出的歌手。她希望和家人環(huán)游世界并更多地了解這個(gè)世界。

Answer 1

【答案】

My best friend---Lucy

Lucy is my best friend. She has round face.and big eyes. She looks sweet.

She is very patiet with other people. and often cares about others. She never says a bad word about others. She has a good voice and in a singing competition sang best and won the first prize. As for her ideal school, she hopes it will start at 9 a.m. and finish at 3:30 p.m.every day. She will just have only an hour’s homework so she has enough time to do after-school activities. She looks forward to her ideal school.

Because she is good at singsing, she wants to be an excellent singer when she grows up. She hopes she will travel around the world with her family and learn more about the world.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。