Question

【題目】書面表達：。

假如你是Simon, 你給你的朋友Lucy寫一封郵件，告訴她有關(guān)于你們學(xué)校一次名為‘Sell for Children’的慈善活動。郵件內(nèi)容包括以下要點：

1. 下周五，你校將組織這一慈善活動，目的是為有困難的孩子們籌錢，他們負(fù)擔(dān)不起學(xué)費，我們應(yīng)該幫助他們。你認(rèn)為這很有意義。

2. 必須賣光所有的東西。校長（headmaster）會被邀請來這次活動。

3. 你希望更多的人能加入這項活動，你相信……。

要求：

1、短文須包括以上所有內(nèi)容要點，語句通順、意思連貫；

2、詞數(shù)80字左右，文章開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

3、第三要點自由發(fā)揮，寫1-2句。

Sell for Children

Dear Lucy,

I haven’t heard from you for a long time. I’d like to tell you something about ‘Sell for Children’.

What do you think of it? Write to me soon.

Best wishes, Simon

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Sell for Children

Dear Lucy,

I haven’t heard from you for a long time. I’d like to tell you something about ‘Sell for Children’. Our school will hold the charity activity next Friday. The purpose of it is to raise money for children in need. They can’t afford to go to school. We should help them. I think it is very meaningful. All the things must be sold out. The headmaster will be invited to the activity. I hope more people will come to join it. I believe helping others is fun. Many hands make light work. It can make our world better.

What do you think of it? Write to me soon.

Best wishes, Simon

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，Simon寫信給Lucy介紹學(xué)校將進行的一次名為‘Sell for Children’的慈善活動。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I’d like to ...，Our school will...； I think it is...；I hope ...；It can...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了寫信目的——要介紹關(guān)于‘Sell for Children’的慈善活動；接下來介紹活動的時間，目的，邀請的人以及要做的事；最后希望這次活動使世界更美好。此處would like to,tell sb about sth, in need, afford to do sth, sold out, think of, write to等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。