【題目】書面表達(dá)。

初級寫作

請根據(jù)所提供的信息，以“My hero”為題，用英文寫一篇短文，介紹中國第一位航天英雄楊利偉。

內(nèi)容提示：1. 1965年出生

2. 是一名優(yōu)秀的飛行員(pilot)

3. 2003年10月15日上午9時(shí)乘“神州五號”飛船(Shenzhou V

Spacecraft)進(jìn)入太空

4. 在太空中度過了21小時(shí)之后成功返回地面

5. 是中國人民的驕傲

要求：1. 文章要點(diǎn)必須齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮

2. 條理清楚，語義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整

3. 詞數(shù)：80-100詞左右

【答案】

My hero

My hero is Yang Liwei, who is the first Chinese to travel in space.

Yang Liwei was born in 1965. He is an excellent pilot. He was sent into space in China’s Shenzhou V Spacecraft at 9 am on October 15th,2003. He successfully came back to the earth after a 21-hour trip in space. He is China’s first spaceman.

I am impressed by his courage. He is the pride of all the people in China. He is a true hero.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第三人稱，一般過去及現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如: be born in出身于……；send into送入；come back回來等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。

練習(xí)冊系列答案
相關(guān)習(xí)題

科目：初中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】根據(jù)短文理解, 選擇正確答案。
There was a story many years ago of a school teacher— Mrs. Thompson. She told the children on the first day that she loved them all the same. But that was a lie. There in the front row was a little boy named Teddy Stoddard. He didn't play well with the other children and he always needed a bath. She did not like him.
Then Mrs. Thompson got to know that Teddy was actually a very good boy before the death of his mother. Mrs. Thompson was ashamed(慚愧的) of herself. She felt even worse, like all her other students, Teddy brought her a Christmas present too. It was his mother's perfume(香水)。
Teddy said, "Mrs. Thompson, today you smell just like my Mom used to." After the children left she cried for at least an hour. On that day, she stopped teaching reading, writing and math. Instead, she began to teach children.
Mrs. Thompson paid particular attention to Teddy. The boy's mind seemed to come alive. The more she encouraged him, the faster he improved. By the end of the sixth grade, Teddy had become one of the smartest children in the class.
Six years went by before she got a note from Teddy. He wrote that he had finished high school, third in his class, and she was still the best teacher he ever had in his whole life. He went to college. Mrs. Thompson got two more letters from him with the last one signed, Theodore F. Stoddard, M. D.(醫(yī)學(xué)博士).
The story doesn't end there. On his wedding（婚禮） day, Dr. Stoddard whispered（低聲的說） in Mrs. Thompson's ear, "Thank you, Mrs. Thompson, for believing in me. You made me feel important and showed me that I could make a difference."
Mrs. Thompson, with tears in her eyes, whispered back, "Teddy, you have it all wrong. You were the one who taught me that I could make a difference. I didn't know how to teach until I met you."
（1）What did Mrs. Thompson do on the first day of school?
A.She made Teddy feel ashamed.
B.She told the class something untrue（不真實(shí)的） about herself.
C.She changed Teddy's seat to the front row.
D.She asked the children to play with Teddy.
（2）What did Mrs. Thompson find out about Teddy?
A.He often told lies.
B.He was good at math.
C.He needed motherly care.
D.He enjoyed playing with others.
（3）Why did Mrs. Thompson feel even worse?
A.Because her students didn't like her.
B.Because Teddy brought her his mother's perfume as Christmas present.
C.Because she was very ill.
D.Because she couldn't do well in her teaching.
（4）In what way did Mrs. Thompson change?
A.She taught fewer school subjects.
B.She became stricter with her students.
C.She no longer liked her job as a teacher.
D.She cared more about educating students.

查看答案和解析>>

科目：初中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】書面表達(dá)

Mary在學(xué)校參加了一個(gè)Buddy Club, 從那以后，她改變了很多。請你結(jié)合下面所給的提示，寫一篇英語短文。

In the past

Now

Personalities

shy, quiet, get nervous easily

brave, outgoing…

Hobbies

reading

reading, singing…

Abilities

good at dancing, singing…

要求:

1. 覆蓋要點(diǎn)，可以合理增加細(xì)節(jié)；

2. 80詞左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.

___________________________________________________________________________________.

___________________________________________________________________________________.

___________________________________________________________________________________.

查看答案和解析>>

科目：初中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】任務(wù)型閱讀。
Four ways to have a good school life
Your schooldays should be some of the best and happiest days of your life. How can you get the most from them, and be sure you do not waste (浪費(fèi)) this great chance to learn?
Be active(積極的) at school
Don't say things are difficult or boring. Take interest in school life and your school subjects. Join lots of activities. Put up your hands quickly in class. Go around the school with a big smile. If you are not working, you are wasting your time at school. Teachers cannot make everything enjoyable（令人愉快的）.
Keep fit
If you don't eat a good breakfast, you will be thinking about food in class. If you go to bed late and don't have enough sleep, you will be sleepy in class. Play enough sports every day in order to keep your body strong.
Face the problem
Do not say you will do things tomorrow. If you get behind the class, it is very difficult to get back in front. You cannot finish the race if you rest all the time. Everyone fails some exams, loses some matches and has bad days. Don't make small problems very big and important. Don't forget to ask for help. You are young, and no one thinks you must do everything quite well!
Spend the weekends
Don't waste time lying in bed on Saturday or Sunday morning. Go and play sports, get together with friends in the park to relax, learn to play the piano, or help someone with problem. If you don't want to go out, there are also a lot of things to do. You may read a book, practice English or help Mum with housework.
Follow our advice, and have a happy school life!

Title

to have a good school life

Be active at school

Be in school life and school subjects.
Join lots of activities.
Make yourself every day.

Keep fit

Eat every morning.
Have enough
Take a lot of exercise daily.

Face the problem

Don't put off(推遲) what you can do till
Don't give up if you
to ask for help if you can't solve your problems.

the weekends

Get out with friends or read or even help with the at home.
Try to make your weekends colorful.

查看答案和解析>>

科目：初中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】句型轉(zhuǎn)換。
（1）The hungry boy ate up all the food on the plate. (變?yōu)楸粍?dòng)語態(tài)）
All the food on the plate up by the hungry boy.
（2）Mary bought a new car two weeks ago. (用完成時(shí)態(tài)改寫）
Mary a new car for two weeks.
（3） you work hard, you will fall behind your classmates.

查看答案和解析>>

科目：初中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】任務(wù)型閱讀。
Amy and her older sister were shopping. They saw this sign： Oranges 5 for $3.00. Buy some and enjoy their delicious flavour! Amy started to laugh.
“What's funny?” asked her sister.
“They spelled flavor wrong, didn't they?” said Amy.
“No, they didn't. They used British English,” said her sister. “Neither of them is wrong.”
“What do you mean?” asked Amy.
“There are many different kinds of English. American and British “English are the most popular ones,” said her sister.
“What are the differences?” asked Amy.
“The biggest difference between American and British English is the words. For example, apartments are called flats by the British. Erasers are called rubbers. Also, movies are called films, and pants are called trousers,” said her sister.
⑴⑵根據(jù)英文釋義及首字母提示，拼寫單詞。⑶同義句轉(zhuǎn)換，每空一詞。⑷根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容簡答問題。
（1）n ： not one nor the other of two things or people
（2）s ： to say or write the letters of a word in the correct order
（3）Neither of them is wrong. of them right.
（4）What is the biggest difference between American and British English?

查看答案和解析>>

科目：初中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】完形填空

It’s very important that we all recycle.In nature,everything ________ again.For example,when an animal dies,it becomes ________ animal’s food.Nothing is wasted.But humans have created things like plastic bags which can’t be ________ down by nature.Our ________ kills animals and pollutes water and soil. ________ we continue making too much rubbish,the problem will only get worse.If nature can’t reuse the rubbish,we must recycle ________ .We should clean up the rubbish we’ve made because nature can’t.

Recycling is also the right thing to do for another reason.The earth is rich in natural materials like water and trees, ________ these materials are not endless(無盡的).We use up our natural materials ________ faster than the earth is able to reproduce(再生)them.For example,each year we cut ________ more than 6,000 square miles of forest.But it takes an average of 25 years for a new tree ________ .

Recycling can help us save the earth,so let’s take action right now.

【1】A.use B.is used C.used D.uses

【2】A.other B.others C.the other D.another

【3】A.lain B.broken C.written D.put

【4】A.rubbish B.nature C.material D.bags

【5】A.When B.Why C.If D.Unless

【6】A.them B.it C.itself D.we

【7】A.but B.so C.and D.or

【8】A.very B.more C.much D.many

【9】A.out B.down C.up D.off

【10】A.grows B.growing C.to grow D.grown

查看答案和解析>>

科目：初中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】連詞成句。用所給單詞和詞組連成句子，注意大小寫。
（1）his mother, to, DIY, take a course in , him, did , advise ,

（2）just 100 grams, she, a white mouse, and ,looked like, weighed,

（3）lead to, will , for ,less and less space, this ,wildlife

（4）to, is ,have big snowball fights, it, exciting

（5）was sleeping, the earthquake, I, when, started

查看答案和解析>>

科目：初中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】任務(wù)型閱讀

閱讀下列短文，根據(jù)短文中的信息完成文后表格。（每空一詞）

More and more people are wearing glasses. Poor eyesight makes us not so happy as those with good eyesight. That is why our eyes should be given a lot of care. Natural eye care should be put in a number one place.

There are several causes leading to poor eyesight such as not enough food, genes(基因) and aging(變老). Televisions, computers and reading are also the causes of having poor eyesight. If you work in front of the computer, it is best to take a break every once in a while. Something dirty can cause redness and they will make you feel uncomfortable. It is bad for your eyes, too. If this happens, you’d better clean your eyes by using cold water. You must also try your best to protect your eyes from harmful things. For example, sunglasses are not just for fashion but they can also serve as a great way to protect your eyesight from UV rays.

Eating healthy foods will do good to your eyesight. Remember that vitamins A, C and E are good for eyes. Try to eat food groups that have lots of these vitamins. And you should do eye exercises because exercise protects your eyesight, too. If a person exercises regularly and eats the right kind of food, his eyes will stay in good condition for a long time.

All above are natural ways of eye care that help us keep healthy eyes. In a word, eye care is very important, no matter how old a person is.

Problems

Many of us have poor eyesight because of paying 【1】 attention to eye care.

Causes

Solutions

◆ Not enough food, genes and aging can 【2】 poor eyesight.

◆ Eating healthy foods which are 【3】 in vitamins A, C and E will do good to our eyesight.

◆ Televisions and computers are the causes of poor eyesight as well as 【4】 .

◆ It’s best to take a break now and then.

◆ Do eye exercises 【5】 .

◆ Something dirty can make your eyes 【6】 and they will make you feel uncomfortable.

◆ Clean your eyes 【7】 cold water.

◆ UV rays can do 【8】 to our eyes.

◆You'd better wear 【9】 to protect your eyesight from UV rays.

Conclusions

In a word, it’s very important for us to 【10】 for our eyes.

查看答案和解析>>

同步練習(xí)冊答案