Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

Mary在學(xué)校參加了一個(gè)Buddy Club, 從那以后，她改變了很多。請你結(jié)合下面所給的提示，寫一篇英語短文。

	In the past	Now
Personalities	shy, quiet, get nervous easily	brave, outgoing…
Hobbies	reading	reading, singing…
Abilities		good at dancing, singing…

要求:

1. 覆蓋要點(diǎn)，可以合理增加細(xì)節(jié)；

2. 80詞左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.

Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl. She used to get nervous easily and her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers. She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time.wever, she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club. Now, Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn’t afraid of speaking out in public anymore. What’s more, she has lots of hobbies, such as singing, writing and dancing. She is good at them as well.

People sure change all the time, right? What we should do is to learn from Mary. Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.

【解析】

試題分析：根據(jù)要求Mary在學(xué)校參加了一個(gè)Buddy Club, 從那以后，她改變了很多；最后注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)。分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后反復(fù)讀幾遍，適當(dāng)修改。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：范文中有好的句型和短語給文章增色不少。如： She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time；Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn’t afraid of speaking out in public anymore.等等。