Question

9．根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文．請(qǐng)不要寫(xiě)出你的真實(shí)校名和姓名．提示詞語(yǔ)供選用．
某英文報(bào)紙就他/她的微笑（His/Her Smile）話題征文，請(qǐng)你投稿．
微笑，是對(duì)他人表示友善和關(guān)愛(ài)．微笑可以給人激勵(lì)，可以使人奮進(jìn)．請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷談?wù)勗谀愕纳�活中誰(shuí)的微笑打動(dòng)了你，為什么他/她的微笑會(huì)打動(dòng)你，你有什么體會(huì)．
提示詞語(yǔ)：show，encourage，difficult，brave，learn to do，feel good，cheer up，try one's best．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①Three years ago，when I made a speech on my first day of class，I was so nervous that I couldn't say a word．三年前，當(dāng)我第一節(jié)課發(fā)表演講時(shí)，我緊張得說(shuō)不出話來(lái)．句子中when引導(dǎo)一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；so+形容詞+that表示如此怎么樣以至于…
②His smile was important because it gave me self-confidence．他的微笑很重要，因?yàn)樗�給了我自信．句子中because引導(dǎo)一個(gè)原因狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Smiles are beautiful and important．A smile given to the right person at the right time can brighten that person's day．（引出話題）
I was once moved by a smile from my friend．Three years ago，when I made a speech on my first day of class，I was so nervous that I couldn't say a word（高分句型）．Tony，one of my classmates，sitting in the front row，smiled at me and spoke in a low voice，"Yes，you can．"I was greatly encouraged by his smile．His smile was important because it gave me self-confidence（高分句型）．（我生活中的一次經(jīng)歷）
I will never forget my friend's smile because I've learned that something so simple can make a big difference．（我的體會(huì)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 對(duì)于作文題，首先應(yīng)該充分了解題目的含義及要求．若給定的條件不足，可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；同時(shí)，平時(shí)還應(yīng)該多注意關(guān)鍵句型、固定短語(yǔ)及高分句型的理解及記憶，做題時(shí)才能得心應(yīng)手．