Question

14．上周日我和Sandy去野生動(dòng)物園參觀，了解到很多動(dòng)物的生存現(xiàn)狀，想在School newsletter上發(fā)文呼吁同學(xué)們共同保護(hù)動(dòng)物．請(qǐng)就下面表格提示內(nèi)容寫一篇80詞左右的短文．
內(nèi)容提示：

現(xiàn)狀	居無(wú)定所	無(wú)食可覓
原因	人類不斷砍伐森林和侵占土地	溫度降至零度以下
應(yīng)對(duì)措施	不僅可以立法，還可以多建自然保護(hù)區(qū)（nature reserve）
建議	作為中學(xué)生，…

注意：
1．短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫；
2．第5個(gè)要點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容須展開合理想象，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮1-2句；
3．短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Last Sunday，Sandy and I went to the Wildlife Park．        ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
We learnt that wildlife had nowhere to live because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands．
句中"that wildlife had nowhere to live"為賓語(yǔ)從句，"because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands"為原因狀語(yǔ)從句．句中短語(yǔ)有"keep doing sth  持續(xù)做某事"．這句話意為：我們了解到動(dòng)物居無(wú)定所，因?yàn)槿祟惒粩嗫撤ド�林和侵占土地�?br />高分句型二：
We can not only make laws but also build more nature reserves to protect the animals from being killed．
句中使用短語(yǔ)有"not only…but also…不僅…而且…"、"protect sb from doing sth  保護(hù)…免受…"．這句話意為：我們不僅可以立法，還可以多建自然保護(hù)區(qū)來(lái)保護(hù)動(dòng)物免受殺害．

解答 Last Sunday，Sandy and I went to the Wildlife Park．We learnt that wildlife had nowhere to live because humans kept cutting down forests and taking lands．【高分句型一】Also when the temperature dropped below zero，wildlife had no food to eat．（動(dòng)物的生存現(xiàn)狀）We should take action to prevent natural disasters and protect wildlife．We can not only make laws but also build more nature reserves to protect the animals from being killed．【高分句型二】As students，we should always ask our parents and relatives not to buy any fur coats．We should try to keep our world clean and peace．（提出建議）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作文時(shí)要注意平時(shí)語(yǔ)言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，寫作時(shí)注意條理清楚，語(yǔ)意通暢．