Question

11．汽車自誕生以來(lái)，大大改變了人類的生活．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)自己的看法，寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的文章，談?wù)勂�車的利與弊．
內(nèi)容包括：
1．汽車給我們帶來(lái)了很多好處，使我們的生活變得更便利；
2．汽車同時(shí)也給我們帶來(lái)了很多問(wèn)題，如車禍、交通堵塞、大氣污染以及噪音污染等等；
3．談?wù)勀銓?duì)當(dāng)今酒駕的看法．并提出一些有利于環(huán)保的建議．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：As we know cars has greatly changed our life since they came into use．a(chǎn)s引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，引出文章的一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，汽車為我們提供了方便．
句型二：so it is very easy to cause traffic accidents．it is+形容詞 to do sth句型：it是形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是后面的動(dòng)詞不定式短語(yǔ) to cause traffic accidents，形容詞easy是用來(lái)作表語(yǔ)的．

解答 As we know cars has greatly changed our life since they came into use【高分句型一】．And they bring us much convenience and make it easier to travel everywhere．（說(shuō)出車給人們帶來(lái)的好處）They can also save our time to do many things．But they also bring trouble to us．First many traffic accidents often happen．Second they have to waste much gas and also pollute the air．So we should consider our environment before buying cars．Drunk driving is a kind of illegal behavior，so it is very easy to cause traffic accidents．【高分句型二】Don't drive a car if you drink the wine．（最直接的提醒）            
With the development of the society in the 21st century，most of the people want to live a green low-carbon life and they pay more attention to the environmental protection and the energy saving，so the development of electromobiles exactly conforms the demand of the environmental protection．（將來(lái)發(fā)展趨勢(shì)）

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