Question

【題目】【2012年重慶】

假如你校有幾位來自美國的交換生，他們打算周末步行去翠湖公園。請根據(jù)提示為他們寫出前往的路線，并簡介公園情況。

要點提示：校對

1．路線(見右圖)；

2．

3．……

要求：

1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

2．文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight

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Answer 1

【答案】

Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight and turn right at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.

The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You my also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文考查體裁為說明文，要求寫出去翠湖公園的路線，并簡介公園情況。時態(tài)可用一般現(xiàn)在時。

寫作要點：1. 去翠湖公園的路線2. 簡介公園情況。公園環(huán)境優(yōu)美、涼爽，還可游泳、野餐等；3. 表達(dá)祝福的心愿。

【亮點說明】這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運用恰當(dāng)，多見好句型和習(xí)慣表達(dá)用語，如：far from, It is easy to do sth. go straight, turn left, at the first corner, on your right, across from, have fun, play games, have a picnic, enjoy yourselves等。這為短文增色不少。