Question

【題目】常言道“良言一句三冬暖，惡語傷人六月寒”。假設你是李雷，你將要參加學校舉辦的英語演講比賽，主題是“語言的力量”，請你寫一篇英文演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：

你的一次受老師或同學言語激勵的經(jīng)歷（事情的經(jīng)過以及對你的影響）；

呼吁同學們要注意自身言語對他人的影響。

作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱、老師和同學的真實姓名。

2.語句連貫，字數(shù)80個左右。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Ladies and gentlemen,

How will words influence others? Let me tell you one of my experiences. _______________

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Answer 1

【答案】How will words influence others? Let me tell you one of my experiences. At the end of Grade 7, I failed in my English exam. I felt sad and cried. At that time, my English teacher said to me smilingly, “Don’t cry! Your spoken English is very good. You are only a bit weak at spelling. I believe you can do better!” Since then, I have been working hard at word spelling and I’ve made great progress in my English.

So encourage others more and try to help them out when they are in difficulty.

【解析】試題分析：本篇習作成功地完成了寫作任務，表達順暢，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，字數(shù)符合要求。準確運用時態(tài)，要點全面，語法正確，上下文意思連貫，適當發(fā)揮了想象。本文應用了很多短語使得文章很生動，例如At the end of，fail in，At that time，only a bit weak at spelling，try to do sth.等。而祈使句的運用則是本文的亮點，例如，Let me tell you one of my experiences.使文章顯得很有親和力，還有Don’t cry!使人感到振奮�？傊�，這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的習作。