Question

【題目】青少年是祖國的未來，也是城市的名片。在創(chuàng)建全國文明城市的過程中，我市舉辦了“美德少年”評選活動。假如你是“美德少年”的爭創(chuàng)者，請根據(jù)下列表格中的提示，以“Be a virtue teenager, build a civilized city”為題，用英語寫一份倡議書，號召大家積極爭做“美德少年”，為港城添彩。

主題	做“美德少年”，創(chuàng)文明城市
內(nèi)容	待人方面：尊老愛幼，友好互助 言談方面：語言文明，耐心傾聽 出行方面：遵守交規(guī)，主動禮讓
你的觀點	聯(lián)系實際，談?wù)勀愕挠^點(至少兩點)

注意：1)、90詞左右。短文標題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2)、文中不得提及有關(guān)考生的個人的身份的任何信息，如: 校名，人名等。

Answer 1

【答案】Be a virtue teenager, build a civilized city

Being a teenager of Longkou, what should we do to help buid a civilized city? Firstly, when in public places, we should respect the elderly and take care of the young. We should also be friendly and helpful to others; Secondly, when having a conversation, we should speak politely and be patient enough to listen; Thirdly, when on the road, we should obey the traffic rules and give seats when necessary.

As junior students, I think it's our duty to do as the above. At the same time, we should try our best to study hard and obey all the school rules. In this way, we can be a virtue teenager and help to build our city into a civilized one. I hope everyone will join us and try to be a virtue teenager.

【解析】本文屬于材料作文，寫一份倡議書，號召大家做美德少年。根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內(nèi)容。這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, respect, be friendly to, necessary以及as等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。