Question

8．Zhou Hui和Ge Bin是"一幫一"活動(dòng)中結(jié)成的一對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)伙伴． Zhou Hui在Ge Bin的幫助下有了明顯的進(jìn)步．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表信息寫一篇60字左右的短文．（開頭已寫出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

Zhou Hui	In the past	didn't listen carefully in his claslike to play computer games every day
Ge Bin	Now	study hard get on well with his classmates
	Make Zhou Hui be interested in his study
	Help Zhou Hui with his study

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
He tried his best to make Zhou Hui be interested in his study and help him with his study after school他盡力讓周輝對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)有興趣，放學(xué)后幫助他學(xué)習(xí)．
try one's best to do sth盡力做某事
【高分句型二】
With his help，Zhou Hui studies very hard and gets on well with his classmates now在他的幫助下，周輝學(xué)習(xí)很努力，現(xiàn)在和同學(xué)相處很好，
with one's help 在某人的幫助下

解答 We are very glad that Zhou Hui has made great progress．But in the past he didn't listen carefully in class．He also liked to play computer games every day．（過去）Ge Bin is Zhou?Hui's?classmate and friend．He tried his best to make Zhou Hui be interested in his study and help him with his study after school．【高分句型一】With his help，Zhou Hui studies very hard and gets on well with his classmates now．【高分句型二】He has made great progress in study．（現(xiàn)在）

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