Question

16．現(xiàn)在社會上對90后有些評論，認為他們自私，迷戀網(wǎng)絡，缺乏責任心，不會與人交流等，針對這些評論，英語課上同學們與老師就此展開了討論．作為90后的一員，請參考下列提示詞寫一篇英語發(fā)言稿，展示真實的你．（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出）
參考詞匯：selfish（自私的），Internet（網(wǎng)絡），responsible（有責任心的），high ideals（崇高理想）
As we know，most of us are the only child in our families now．Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us，which make us become selfish．Usually we are so concentrate on the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others．
There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well．
We teenagers have high ideals．We always believe in ourselves and never say"die"．Meanwhile we are in style．New ideas can be easily accepted by us．You can find out that creative thinking is full of our life．We also know how to respectour parents and teachers．
We are growing up．We are sure to do better．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us我們的父母非常愛我們，他們盡力為我們做一切．try one's best to do sth．盡某人最大努力做某事
【高分句型二】
There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well毫無疑問，我們也有自己的優(yōu)勢．There is no doubt that毫無疑問．

解答 As we know，most of us are the only child in our families now．Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us【高分句型一，注意try one's best to do sth的使用】，which make us become selfish．Usually we are so concentrate on the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others．【要點一，現(xiàn)在社會上對90后有些評論，認為他們自私，迷戀網(wǎng)絡，缺乏責任心，不會與人交流等】
There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well．【高分句型二，注意There is no doubt that的使用】
We teenagers have high ideals．We always believe in ourselves and never say"die"．Meanwhile we are in style．New ideas can be easily accepted by us．You can find out that creative thinking is full of our life．We also know how to respect our parents and teachers．【要點二，我們的優(yōu)點】
We are growing up．We are sure to do better．

點評 在寫作時需要明確寫作要點，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達流暢，平時多注意�？嫉淖魑男问�，積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯．