Question

1．安全對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語(yǔ)小短文．
提示：1．體育鍛煉
       2．上下樓梯
       3．交朋結(jié)友
       4．食品衛(wèi)生
要求：1．語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容連貫；
       2．短文可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；但要包含以上要點(diǎn)．
       3．詞數(shù)：80-100詞．短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Safety has become the focus to us all．How to be safe at school is especially important to us students．（體育鍛煉中的安全）First，we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports．（上下樓梯的安全）Second，There are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow．So don't crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs．Or there may be an accident．（交朋結(jié)友的安全）Third，we should be friendly and get on well with others，don't quarrel or even fight．（食品衛(wèi)生中的安全）Last but not least，We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health．
（總結(jié)概括）In a word，it's important to remember these for us all．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文．結(jié)合要點(diǎn)提示，可知本文主要從四個(gè)方面進(jìn)行敘述，1．體育鍛煉2．上下樓梯3．交朋結(jié)友4．食品衛(wèi)生．注意圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱(chēng)為主．寫(xiě)作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．
重點(diǎn)詞匯和短語(yǔ)：First，．Second．Third．Last but not least首先，第二，第三，最后但同樣重要的
get on well with 和…相處的好
keep away from遠(yuǎn)離…
be harmful to對(duì)…有害
in a word總之
 等等

解答 Safety has become the focus to us all．How to be safe at school is especially important to us students． First，we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports．（體育鍛煉中的安全） Second，There are too many students at school，and our hallways are too narrow．So don't crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs．Or there may be an accident．（上下樓梯的安全）Third，we should be friendly and get on well with others，don't quarrel or even fight． （交朋結(jié)友的安全） Last but not least，We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food，which is harmful to our health．（食品衛(wèi)生中的安全） （高分句型）
In a word，it's important to remember these for us all． （總結(jié)概括） （高分句型）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 做英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)，要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時(shí)態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞．最后，注意不要犯語(yǔ)法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤．