Question

Writing 7(2014江蘇鎮(zhèn)江句容>

假設(shè)你是李明，Peter是你的英國網(wǎng)友。他對目前中國多個城市出現(xiàn)的霧天氣很關(guān)注(concern ) ，來信向你詢問此事。請你給他寫封回信。

要點如下：

1. 感謝他的關(guān)注；

2. 簡要介紹霧霾(haze) 天氣給人們的身體、生活帶來的 危害；

3. 針對霧霾天氣應(yīng)采取的防護措施和治理建議；

4. 談?wù)勀愕目捶ɑ蚋邢搿?/p>

要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名和地名；

2. 信的內(nèi)容必須包含以上所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮；

3. 詞數(shù):不少于90詞，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總 詞數(shù)。

Dear Peter, 

    I’m glad to receive your letter. 

                            Yours ,

                           Li Min

Answer 1

Writing 7

[寫作提示]

1. 審題：

本文屬于應(yīng)用文中的書信。以第一人稱為主，主體時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn) 在時。

2. 確定要點：

(1) 感謝Peter的關(guān)心;

(2) 霧霾天氣給人們的身體、生活帶來的危害；

(3) 防護措施和治理建議；

(4) 你的看法或感想。

[參考范文]

Dear Peter,

    I’m glad to receive your letter. I have learned from your letter that you are concerned about the haze which frequently appears in some areas of China. Thank you for your concern. Fm also very worried about such terrible weather because it has brought much inconvenience and harm to people such as traffic jams,road accidents,bad coughs,throat aches,cancers and so on.As everybody knows,a good environment comes from good protection.So we should do what we can to make a difference.Try to drive less and choose air-friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness can we have cleaner air.

    Hope to hear from you soon and share your good ideas.

                           Yours,

                          Li Ming