Question

Writing 3(2015江蘇鹽城濱海縣第一次調(diào)研)

    母愛情深，母愛無價(jià)，學(xué)會感恩，學(xué)會回報(bào)。請你根據(jù)下面 的思維導(dǎo)圖提供的信息，以“ My mother”為題，寫一篇短文，介紹 你的母親和你的真情故事。

提示：1. 短文應(yīng)包括思維導(dǎo)圖中的全部信息，條理清楚，行文 連貫，段落分明；

2. 短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；

3. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

            My mother

    We need love. We also need to love.The person I love most is my mother.     

Answer 1

Writing 3

[寫作提示]

1. 審題：

這是一篇記敘文。以第一人稱客觀介紹你的母親，表達(dá)你對母親 的愛。涉及時(shí)態(tài)較多，要正確使用。

2. 確定要點(diǎn)：

(1) 介紹母親:年齡、工作、外貌、能力、愛好；

(2) 母親為你做的事；

(3) 你要為母親做的事；

(4) 你對母親的表白。

[參考范文]

            My mother

    We need love. We also need to love.The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old.She is a common worker.She is tall and slim. She likes reading.She can cook delicious food.

    She did a lot for me when I was a child.She bought whatever I needed for study,though she didn't have much money. She looked after me well when I was ill. She cooked delicious meals for me every day.

    When I grow up,I will do what I can to make my mother happy.I will find a good job and make money to buy clothes for her. I will go travelling with her. Also I will stay with her when I am free. That's what she wants most,I think.

    Dear mother,I love you forever!