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4．健康的興趣愛好不僅給我們帶來快樂，還能幫助我們?cè)鲩L(zhǎng)見識(shí)，學(xué)習(xí)技能，甚至?xí)�成為我們未來的工作．�?qǐng)以"My hobby"為題，結(jié)合自己自身的經(jīng)歷寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文．
寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．What is your hobby？
2．Why do you have the hobby？/Why do you keep it as your hobby？
3．What have you learned from your hobby？
要求：
（1）文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
（2）詞數(shù)：80左右．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Though I'm not good at it，I often lose myself in it．雖然我不擅長(zhǎng)，但是我經(jīng)常沉迷于此．
though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句．不能與but連用．
【高分句型二】
When I am angry with something，it also can make me happy again．當(dāng)我生氣的時(shí)候，能讓我再開心．
①when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句．
②make sb+adj讓某人怎樣．

解答 My hobby
Everyone has our own hobbies，it may give us a lot of happiness．Then what's my hobby？My hobby is listening to music．（我的愛好是什么）When I was a child I enjoy listening to music especially the cartoon music．Though I'm not good at it，I often lose myself in it．（為什么有這個(gè)愛好）【高分句型一】When I am in trouble，music can make me calm down．When I am very tired，it can make me comfortable．When I am angry with something，it also can make me happy again．（愛好給我的幫助）【高分句型二】My parents think it's helpful for me．Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health．I can learn how to be happy in my life．（我能從中學(xué)到什么）
Do you like listening to music？If not，I hope you can have a try，you'll find it is so good．（給別人的建議）

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