Question

9．假定今天是六月十六日（星期六，天氣晴朗），你和朋友去沙湖（Sand Lake）游玩．請根據(jù)下面所給內(nèi)容寫一篇日記，記錄本次活動(dòng)并簡要談?wù)劯惺埽?br />提示：1．到達(dá)：上午九點(diǎn)；（Bird Island）
2．活動(dòng)：乘船觀鳥島，騎馬（ride horses），踢球，游泳，吃午飯，唱歌，做游戲．
3．返回：下午三點(diǎn)．
要求：詞數(shù)：70左右，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．已給出的句子不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Saturday，June 16th SunnyToday my friends and I went to the Sand Lake．
                                               

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
But with the help of my classmates，I rode the horse best．但是在同學(xué)們的幫助下，我騎的最好．
with the help of在…的幫助下．
【高分句型二】
I hope I will come back again．我希望下次再來這兒．
復(fù)合句"I hope+賓語從句"的應(yīng)用．

解答 Saturday，June 16th Sunny
Today my friends and I went to Sand Lake．We got Bird Island at nine o'ckock in the morning．（交待時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）We visited Bird Island and we saw many kinds of wonderful birds there．After visiting Bird Island，we rode horses．It's my first time to ride a horse．At first，I was afried．But with the help of my classmates，I rode the horse best．【高分句型一】Then we swam in the pool and played football together．Some students sang and played games．After walking so long time，we all felt hungry and have lunch at a big restaurant．The food there is delicious．（游玩經(jīng)歷和活動(dòng)）
At three  o'clock in the afternoon，we began to return to school．Although we are all tired，we had a great time．I hope I will come back again．【高分句型二】（對(duì)游玩的總結(jié)以及美好愿望）

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