Question

16．"光盤"一詞在2013年有了新的定義，意為"吃光盤子里食物"，珍惜糧食，反對浪費．請結合要點提示，聯(lián)系實際，適當發(fā)揮，以"I clear，I proud''為題，寫一篇90字左右的英語短文．文章開頭已給出，不計入總字數．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息．
要點：
1、"光盤"行動的意義（兩點）
2、從自己做起（兩點建議）
3、請父母朋友們支持（兩點建議）
I Clear，I Proud
Since a netizen（網友）called on people to"clear the plate"on the Internet，some citizens in Suzhou have taken action to support it．We middle school students should also do something to help．
With a large population in China，the food we waste every year causes a huge of money and energy，．It's time for us to wake up．Also，clearing the plate and sacing the food is a good habit for kids and the country later on．
First，we start from ourselves．We should not waste the food we have every day，especially the lunch at school．It's better to order the foodwe want and eat it up．
Second，our parents sometimes order too much when they eat in the restaurants．So we'd better tell them not to order too much and remember to pack the food home if there's any left．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內容是以"I clear，I proud''為題談談"光盤"行動的意義以及自己和父母朋友們的做法．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1、"光盤"行動的意義（兩點）
2、從自己做起（兩點建議）
3、請父母朋友們支持（兩點建議）
常用到的重點短語：
wake up 醒來
eat up 吃光
had better do sth 最好做某事
tell sb to do sth告訴某人做某事
remember to do sth 記得去做某事
【高分句型】
1．We should not waste the food ①we have every day，②especially the lunch at school．
①we have是定語從句，先行詞是food，關系詞which或者that做從句的賓語，故省略．
②especially副詞，尤其是
2．So①we'd better ②tell them not to order too much and ③remember to pack the food home ④if there's any left．
①had better do sth 最好做某事
②tell sb not to do sth讓某人不要做某事
③remember to do sth 記得去做某事
④if引導的條件狀語從句．

解答 I Clear，I Proud
   Since a netizen（網友）called on people to"clear the plate"on the Internet，some citizens in Suzhou have taken action to support it．We middle school students should also do something to help．
   With a large population in China，the food we waste every year causes a huge of money and energy，．It's time for us to wake up．Also，clearing the plate and sacing the food is a good habit for kids and the country later on．（"光盤"行動的意義）
   First，we start from ourselves．We should not waste the food we have every day，especially the lunch at school．【高分句型】It's better to order the food we want and eat it up．（從自己做起）
   Second，our parents sometimes order too much when they eat in the restaurants．So we'd better tell them not to order too much and remember to pack the food home if there's any left．【高分句型】（請父母朋友們支持）

點評 以提綱提供情景的作文．要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性，就不會造成審題不清而偏離主題，但要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個提綱的要點．行文間要注意簡化描述，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句．在作文完成的時候，應該檢查、修改，以免遺漏一些需要表達清楚的要點和細節(jié)．