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11．假如外商布朗先生將來紅光帽廠洽談業(yè)務，請你以該廠銷售員的身份，在答題卡指定的位置上用英語寫一篇短文，向他介紹工廠概況，內(nèi)容要點如下：
1．紅光帽廠建于1998年；
2．現(xiàn)有約200名工人，其中多數(shù)是中學畢業(yè)后回鄉(xiāng)的學生；技師來自上海的大工廠；
3．工廠主要生產(chǎn)童帽和女帽，質(zhì)量優(yōu)良；
4．銷售情況和合作愿望．
注意：
1．短文須包括所給內(nèi)容要點，要求條理清楚、語句通順；
2．第4要點的內(nèi)容須用2至3句話展開合理想象，作適當發(fā)揮；
3．詞數(shù)80個左右，短文的開頭和結尾均已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：質(zhì)量  quality
Mr Brown，
Welcome to the Red Light Hat Factory!Our factory was set up in 1998．It has about 200 workers．Most of them were high school students．After they finished school，they returned to their home town．The engineers come from the big factor ies in Shanghai． Our factory mainly makes hats for children and women．The hats are of good quality．They sell well in the markets of Europe．This year we've made 20 percent more hats than we did last year．Orders for our hats are welcome!
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以紅光帽廠銷售員的身份，向外商布朗先生介紹工廠概況．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．紅光帽廠建于1998年；
2．現(xiàn)有約200名工人，其中多數(shù)是中學畢業(yè)后回鄉(xiāng)的學生；技師來自上海的大工廠；
3．工廠主要生產(chǎn)童帽和女帽，質(zhì)量優(yōu)良；
4．銷售情況和合作愿望．

常用到的重點短語：
set up 建立
come from 來自
of good quality 質(zhì)量好

【高分句型】
1．Our factory was set up in 1998．
一般過去時的被動語態(tài)--was/were+過去分詞，set up建立．
2．This year we've made 20 percent more hats than we did last year．
 more hats than 比較級的運用．

解答 Mr Brown，
Welcome to the Red Light Hat Factory!Our factory was set up in 1998．【高分句型】（紅光帽廠建于1998年）It has about 200 workers．Most of them were high school students．After they finished school，they returned to their home town．The engineers come from the big factories in Shanghai．（現(xiàn)有約200名工人，其中多數(shù)是中學畢業(yè)后回鄉(xiāng)的學生；技師來自上海的大工廠）
   Our factory mainly makes hats for children and women．The hats are of good quality．（工廠主要生產(chǎn)童帽和女帽，質(zhì)量優(yōu)良）They sell well in the markets of Europe．This year we've made 20 percent more hats than we did last year．【高分句型】Orders for our hats are welcome!（銷售情況和合作愿望）
Thank you!

點評 本篇作文由于提綱材料本身決定了寫作對象、范圍、目的、體裁等，命題者的意圖往往較容易領悟，考生在審題上一般不會出現(xiàn)障礙．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點提示運用相關的句型結構靈活的展開作文．考生需注意不要逐詞逐句地進行翻譯，所寫句子要符合英語的表達習慣．