Question

【題目】寫作

學(xué)生會(huì)將要邀請Mr Black做一個(gè)關(guān)于觀看音樂會(huì)（concert）禮儀的演講，請根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容，寫一個(gè)不少于100詞的通知，不包括所給的開頭和結(jié)尾。

Name of the talk:	良好的觀看音樂會(huì)的禮儀
Purpose of the talk:	教學(xué)生觀看音樂會(huì)的規(guī)則
Time:	5月13日，下午2點(diǎn)
Place:	學(xué)校禮堂
Content:	1、 提前半小時(shí)入場，排隊(duì)，不插隊(duì) 2、入場后，與他人小聲交談 3、開始后，保持安靜，不講電話 4．不吃東西，不隨意走動(dòng) 5、結(jié)束后，鼓掌，表示感謝
Conclusion:	我們應(yīng)當(dāng)確保演奏者和觀眾都心情舒適、愉快。

要求：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)100左右；

2. 短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；

參考詞匯：演奏者：player 觀眾：audience

Hello, everyone,

May I have your attention, please?

We are going to invite Mr Black to

Thank you very much for your listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Hello, everyone,

May I have your attention, please?

We are going to invite Mr Black to give us a speech——Good matters of watching the concert at 2:00 a.m. on May 13 th at the school hall. The speech is to teach us the rules of watching the concert. The following are the rules.

We should enter the scene half an hour ahead of time and we must stand in line and can’t cut in the line. We can’t talk with others in whisper after we enter there. Once the concert starts, we should keep quiet and can’t talk on the telephone. During the concert, we can’t eat and walk around. When the concert is over, we should clamp. In all, we should be sure that the performers and audience feel comfortable and delighted.

Thank you very much for your listening

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹Mr Black做一個(gè)關(guān)于觀看音樂會(huì)（concert）禮儀的演講。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)的動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：We are going to.......，The speech is to......，We should .......，We can’t ......等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了Mr Black演講的題目，地點(diǎn)和時(shí)間，接下來介紹演講的內(nèi)容，最后感謝大家聽演講。此處ahead of time, in line, talk with, keep quiet, walk around, in all, be sure等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。