Question

【題目】Writing

In 60-100 words, make up a two-turn dialogue according to the given situation（根據(jù)所給情境編一篇 60-100詞的兩個(gè)輪次的對(duì)話。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格，對(duì)話的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。）

Situation: Tome Brown, a 40-year-old P. E. teacher, saved a boy from being knocked down by a car. Crystal school reporter wanted to write an article about his good deed（事跡）. She interviewed Tom Brown.

The interview begins like this:

Crystal: Mr. Brown, May I ask you a few questions? Tom Brown: Sure. Please go ahead.

Crystal: Tom Brown:

Crystal: Tom Brown:

Crystal: Thank you for you time! It’s nice talking to you.

（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）

Answer 1

【答案】Crystal: Mr. Brown, May I ask you a few questions?

Tom Brown: Sure. Please go ahead.

Crystal:When and where the accident happened?

Tom Brown: At about 8:30, I was walking on Ocean Road when a boy on a bike passed me quickly. The road was empty at that time so the boy kept riding in the middle.

Crystal: How did the accident happened?

Tom Brown: The boy was listening to music with earplugs and he didn’t hear the warning. Suddenly the car speeded up and passed the boy. Unfortunately, it hit the boy. The boy fell off his bike onto the road, but the car didn’t stop.

Crystal: What did you do then?

Tom Brown: The number plate of the car was so dirty that I couldn’t see the number clearly. The boy was badly hurt so I sent him to the office. Then I called the police.

Crystal: Thank you for you time! It’s nice talking to you.

【解析】

1.題干解讀：本文屬于對(duì)話，主要表達(dá)校記者需要寫一個(gè)關(guān)于體育老師救了一個(gè)被車撞了的小孩的事跡而進(jìn)行的一個(gè)采訪。注意時(shí)態(tài)的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用，詢問當(dāng)時(shí)發(fā)生的事情以及體育老師描述當(dāng)時(shí)的情景需要使用一般過去時(shí)。并靈活使用所學(xué)的單詞、短語以及句型使文章更加生動(dòng)。

2.這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。

3.高分亮點(diǎn)：

單詞短語：at that time, keep doing, listen to, with, speed up以及fall off。

高分句型：

I was walking on Ocean Road when a boy on a bike passed me quickly中使用了be doing...when...結(jié)構(gòu)；

The number plate of the car was so dirty that I couldn’t see the number clearly中so...that...引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句。