Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（本大題共10分）

近幾年，微信（ Wechat）變得時(shí)尚而受歡迎，給我們的生活帶來了很大的影響。請根據(jù)

以下要點(diǎn)，寫一篇以微信（ Wechat）為題的短文，闡述你對微信的看法。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

1． 過去我們常常寫信，發(fā)郵件與他人交流，而現(xiàn)在越來越多的人使用微信；

2． 微信可以發(fā)語音，文本信息和圖片，視頻（video）；

3． 微信使大家交友更容易，還能快速分享自己的經(jīng)歷；

4． 但是，也帶來一些困擾，視頻聊天，不利于學(xué)習(xí)，微信交友，并不安全……..

5． 你對使用微信的態(tài)度。

注意：詞數(shù)在90詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，第四，五可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

In recent years, Wechat is becoming fashionable and popular. It has made a difference to our daily life.

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Answer 1

【答案】

In recent years, WeChat is becoming fashionable and popular. It has made a difference to our daily life. We used to get in touch with each other by letters and emails, but now more and more people are using WeChat. We can send voice and text messages through WeChat as well as pictures and videos easily. By using it, making friends is becoming easier. And we can share our life experiences faster. However, there are also some problems. Using WeChat too often is not good for students’ study. And it is not safe for students to make friends by WeChat . I think WeChat is helpful to us, but we should always be careful.

【解析】

試題分析： 這篇作文圍繞微信來寫作，題目中具體列出了寫作要點(diǎn)，將其歸類可包括微信的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，缺點(diǎn)，以及自己對微信的態(tài)度。作文課采用第一人稱，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作時(shí)避免將要點(diǎn)逐句翻譯，可將一要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行整合，并且相關(guān)句子之間可使用一個(gè)連接詞來增加文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整清楚，表述準(zhǔn)確流暢。文中使用了很多短語如，used to過去常做，get in touch保持聯(lián)系，as well as和，be good for對……有益，等等。另外，文章使用了一些連接詞，使文章更加流暢，如but但是， and并且，however然而。句子Using WeChat too often is not good for students’ study.動(dòng)名詞形式做主語。