分析 這是一篇提綱作文.內(nèi)容是談?wù)勼w育鍛煉的好處及自己的看法建議.時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí).人稱主要為第一、三人稱.
寫作思路:考生需要首先審清主題,圍繞主題展開作文.
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文,即本文的寫作要點(diǎn):
1、鍛煉身體的好處:
2、鍛煉身體的方式:
3、對(duì)學(xué)校開展體育鍛煉的看法和建議(至少兩點(diǎn))
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語:
help sb do sth 幫助某人做某事
keep healthy保持健康
such as 例如
take part in 參加
【高分句型】
1.①If we don't take any exercise,we may ②feel tired and get sick easily.
①if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句,主句含有情態(tài)動(dòng)詞may,從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來時(shí).
②feel和get都是系動(dòng)詞,和后面的形容詞構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu).
2.I hope①teachers will leave us less homework②so that we can have more time③to take part in sports.
①省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句
②so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句.
②動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語.
解答 Health is very important to us teenagers.Either study or work is based on strong body.Doing sports everyday helps us keep healthy and energetic.If we don't take any exercise,we may feel tired and get sick easily.【高分句型】Just as the slogan say,"Exercise one hour a day,keep illness away."(鍛煉身體的好處)
There are many kinds of sports we can do,such as running,swimming and ball games.(鍛煉身體的方式)
Now we students have to do too much homework after school.I hope teachers will leave us less homework so that we can have more time to take part in sports.【高分句型】I also hope our school can organize more sports activities for us.(對(duì)學(xué)校開展體育鍛煉的看法和建議)
點(diǎn)評(píng) 以提綱提供情景的作文.要注意遣詞造句的靈活性和語法規(guī)則的正確性,就不會(huì)造成審題不清而偏離主題,但要注意,文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn).行文間要注意簡(jiǎn)化描述,用簡(jiǎn)短的語句代替冗長(zhǎng)的語句.在作文完成的時(shí)候,應(yīng)該檢查、修改,以免遺漏一些需要表達(dá)清楚的要點(diǎn)和細(xì)節(jié).
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