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18．"整個(gè)場(chǎng)面我要hold住"，"今天，你hold住了嗎？"，"今天我要跟你PK"，"你out了嗎？"…曾幾何時(shí)，在我們的談話和寫(xiě)作中，網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言層出不窮，這種"混搭"語(yǔ)言究竟好不好呢？每個(gè)人看法不同．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面提示，以"Internet slang（俚語(yǔ)）words"為話題，談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)，80詞左右．（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
提示：
1．網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言的好處：有趣、時(shí)尚…
2．網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言的壞處：有些詞意思不明確，影響我們正常的交際…
3．我的觀點(diǎn)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)流行語(yǔ)在正確的場(chǎng)合使用…
4．可能用到的詞：interesting，fashionable，confusing，misunderstand（曲解、誤會(huì)），opinion，Information Age （信息時(shí)代），right situation （正確的場(chǎng)合）
Internet slang words
Now we hear of lots of Internet slang words，like"hold"，"PK"and"out"in our daily life．Lots of people use them when they are talking or when they are writing．Some people think these slang words are very interesting and fashionable．But some of us don't think so．They think it's hard to understand them，because their meanings are sometimes confusing．Some words may even make people misunderstand each other．
However，each coin has two sides．In my opinion，with the development of our times，we should know the Internet slang words in the Information Age，but make sure we can use them in a right situation．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是以"Internet slang（俚語(yǔ)）words"為題，談?wù)勀銓?duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言的看法．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一、三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1．網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言的好處：有趣、時(shí)尚…
2．網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言的壞處：有些詞意思不明確，影響我們正常的交際…
3．我的觀點(diǎn)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)流行語(yǔ)在正確的場(chǎng)合使用…
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
lots of 大量的
make sb do sth 讓某人做某事
in one's opinion 依某人看來(lái)
make sure 確信
【高分句型】
1．They think①②it's hard to understand them，③because their meanings are sometimes confusing
①省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②it is+adj+to do sth 做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．
③because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
2．However，each coin has two sides．
however轉(zhuǎn)折．each coin has two sides凡事都有兩面性，諺語(yǔ)的使用．

解答 Internet slang words
Now we hear of lots of Internet slang words，like"hold"，"PK"and"out"in our daily life．Lots of people use them when they are talking or when they are writing．Some people think these slang words are very interesting and fashionable．（網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言的好處）But some of us don't think so．They think it's hard to understand them，because their meanings are sometimes confusing．【高分句型】Some words may even make people misunderstand each other．（網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言的壞處）
However，each coin has two sides．【高分句型】In my opinion，with the development of our times，we should know the Internet slang words in the Information Age，but make sure we can use them in a right situation．（我的觀點(diǎn)）

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