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6．同學(xué)們，我們已經(jīng)過了多年的學(xué)校生活，學(xué)校生活有時(shí)是快樂的，有時(shí)是忙碌的，有時(shí)是…假設(shè)你是Li Tao，請(qǐng)以My school life為題，給你在美國(guó)的網(wǎng)友Jack 寫-封電子郵件，介紹你的學(xué)習(xí)生活，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，字?jǐn)?shù)約80字左右，文中不可出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、地點(diǎn)、校名等．Dear Jack，
Hi，I'm Li Tao，a student of Class 6，Grade 9．My school life is…
very interesting．
Classes begin at 8：00 am．I have four classes in the morning．In the afternoon，I have two classes．I study Chinese，math，English and some other subjects．English is my favorite subject and I often speak English with my classmates．I also like P．E．a(chǎn)nd music．But I don't like math at all．I think it's difficult and boring．Do you think so？
After school，I often play basketball with my classmates．It's my favorite outdoor activity．Sometimes I draw pictures with my good friends in the park．Every Tuesday and Thursday，I go to the school library．Do you think my school life is very interesting？
My teachers are very friendly to me．And I like my school life very much．What about you？
Can you tell me something about your school life？Sincerely，Li Tao．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容以My school life為題，給你在美國(guó)的網(wǎng)友Jack 寫-封電子郵件，介紹你的學(xué)習(xí)生活，注意郵件的格式．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
1．課程安排，以及我喜歡的科目
2．課外活動(dòng)

常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
not…at all：一點(diǎn)也不
be friendly to sb：對(duì)某人友好
【高分句型】
1．①But I ②don't like math at all．
①but"但是"，表示轉(zhuǎn)折，引出下文．
②not…at all：一點(diǎn)也不
2．I think it's difficult and boring
think后接上賓語從句．
3．Do you think my school life is very interesting？
think后接上賓語從句．一般疑問句詢問好友的意見．

解答 One possible version
Dear Jack，
Hi，I'm Li Tao，a student of Class 6，Grade 9．My school life is very interesting．
Classes begin at 8：00 am．I have four classes in the morning．In the afternoon，I have two classes．I study Chinese，math，English and some other subjects．English is my favorite subject and I often speak English with my classmates．I also like P．E．a(chǎn)nd music．But I don't like math at all．【高分句型】I think it's difficult and boring．【高分句型】Do you think so？（課程安排，以及我喜歡的科目）
After school，I often play basketball with my classmates．It's my favorite outdoor activity．Sometimes I draw pictures with my good friends in the park．Every Tuesday and Thursday，I go to the school library．Do you think my school life is very interesting？【高分句型】（課外活動(dòng)）
My teachers are very friendly to me．And I like my school life very much．What about you？
Can you tell me something about your school life？
Sincerely，Li Tao

點(diǎn)評(píng) 初中英語的作文，著重考察學(xué)生連詞成句的能力，要在"準(zhǔn)"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動(dòng)詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)等諸多方面．在對(duì)所出現(xiàn)的問題或是采取的措施描寫中注意使用連詞或是好的句式．對(duì)于中學(xué)作文的寫作，盡量將所學(xué)的知識(shí)運(yùn)用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文．在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對(duì)于寫的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫，考試時(shí)就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文．