Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

Millie打算向美國的學(xué)生介紹自己的國家，根據(jù)表格里的要點(diǎn)，寫一篇文章介紹中國。

Country	China
Location	in North Asia, next to Russia, India and Japan
Capital city	Beijing
Languages	Chinese, English as a second language
Population	over 1.3 billion, the first largest population in the world
Crops	rice , wheat and corn
Customs	many festivals and fairs, Qipao—traditional clothes for women
Attractions	the great wall, the Palace Museum, The Temple of Heaven, Tian’anmen Square, Suzhou gardens, the Landscape of Guilin…

注意： 1. 不得出現(xiàn)自己的學(xué)校和真實(shí)姓名。

2. 必須包含所提示的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

3. 詞數(shù)：90詞左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

I am Millie. I’m from China. China lies in the north of Asia. It is next to Russion. To the east is Japan, which faces China across the East China Sea. Now it has a population of more than 1.2 billion, making up a quarter of the world population.Our capital is Beijing. We speak Chinese ,and we speak English as a second language. We grow rice , wheat and corn. We have many festivals and fairs. For example, we eat dumplings for Spring Festival. Qipao is the traditional clothes for women. There are a lot of places of interest.. The Great Wall is one of the wonders in the world．The Palace Museum has 9999 palaces. It has a very long history.

The Temple of Heaven is located in southern Beijing.And you can visit Tian’anmen Square, Suzhou gardens, the Landscape of Guilin and so on.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如There are a lot of places of interest.. The Great Wall is one of the wonders in the world等，F(xiàn)or example等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。