Question

【題目】書面表達

郭青是一名交換生，現(xiàn)在在美國學習，請幫他寫一封信給他的筆友Jim,介紹一下他的學習生活，要點如下：

1.他來美國學習已經(jīng)有三個月了。

2.通過看英語電影，和美國朋友交流，他的英語口語有了明顯的提高。

3.他很想念遠在中國的家人和朋友，希望能早日回家。

4.美國最重要的節(jié)日之一是圣誕節(jié)，家人們聚在一起分享愛和歡樂。

5.請補充一至兩點美國人慶祝圣誕節(jié)的活動

6.參考詞匯：節(jié)日 festival 團聚 get together 圣誕節(jié) Christmas

Dear Jim,

Thanks for your letter.

As an exchange student,______

I’m looking forward to your reply

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

Thanks for your letter.I am in America as an exchanged student, I has studied in America for three months. My oral English have been improved a lot by by watching English movies, and having conversations with American friends. I misses as far away as my family and friends in China and I hope can go home as soon as possible. One of the most important American holidays is Christmas, family members come together to share love and joy.the children likes Christmas best .because they can get somegifts from Santa Clau.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Guo Qing

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知郭青作為交換生在美國學習，并向筆友介紹他的生活。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。

寫作亮點：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: I has studied in America for three months.應用現(xiàn)在完成時。My oral English have been improved a lot by by watching English movies,by+doing的結構,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.