Question

我市是一個(gè)海濱旅游城市，每年夏天接待大量的外國游客。學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)決定招聘部分志愿者在暑假期間為外國游客服務(wù)。
假若你是李華(16歲，九年級(jí)十一班），希望參加這次志愿活動(dòng)，既幫助別人，鍛煉自己，又能提高自己的英語能力。
請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示，用英文回復(fù)下面的招聘啟事。
注意內(nèi)容 1.包括應(yīng)聘的條件、目的及打算；          2.不要出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；  4.詞數(shù):80左右。
Volunteers Wanted
Serving for the foreign visitors during the summer vacation.
Outgoing; Excellent spoken English ；Know about some western culture Those who are interested in this activity, please send your email to studentunion@ 163. com before June 14th, 2014 for an applying.
Student Union
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am interested in becoming one of the volunteers.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am interested in becoming one of the volunteers. I'm Li Hua，a girl of sixteen years old, from Class 11， Grade 9. English is my favorite subject, and I can speak English very well. What's more，I know some customs of some foreign countries. As an outgoing girl, I'm getting on well with my classmates and teachers. I really like to meet all kinds of people.
To be a volunteer, I can not only help others but also help myself，because I can have a good understanding of the world. I believe I can get much knowledge and working skills from helping others. Besides, it can improve my English and it's quite helpful for my future life.
If I am accepted, I'll try my best to do it well. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。
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