Question

Write at least 60 words about the topic “My opinion on copying others? homework”(以“我對抄襲他們?nèi)俗鳂I(yè)的看法”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。) 注意：
1.短文必須包含下列三大點(diǎn)；
2. 第一至第三要點(diǎn)必須包含1--2個(gè)列表中所給詞語，但第三點(diǎn)要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3.短文標(biāo)題與開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

1)The main reason (主要原因)	a large amount of homework, difficult to work out, lazy
2) The harms         (危害)	a bad habit, be against the rules of the school
3)Your views       (你的看法)	be honest, work hard

（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）

Answer 1

My opinion on copying others’ homework
It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework. There are several reasons for this phenomenon. The main reason is that a large amount of homework which is difficult to work out needs to be done every day. Although copying others’ homework seems to do us a favor when we have to stay up late to finish the endless exercises, in fact, it really does harm to us students in terms of getting into a bad habit of being lazy to think over difficult questions. As far as I am concerned, as a student, we should not only be honest but work hard to finish all the homework on our own as well. As a saying goes ”practice makes perfect”. If we keep practicing and reviewing our lessons through doing homework, we can do a good job in our exams.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，文章的題目已經(jīng)給出，而且列出了三條細(xì)節(jié)。寫作文時(shí)要仔細(xì)審題，每一條都要寫到。要注意前后句的連接，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章主要寫我對抄襲作業(yè)的看法，要點(diǎn)全部都寫出，并且增加了一些內(nèi)容使文章更通順，更符合要求。文中使用很多短語，讓文章更加出彩，如It is known to us all that，a large amount of.，stay up late , As far as I am concerned，As a saying goes ”practice makes perfect”等。在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中，要注意點(diǎn)滴積累，這樣在寫作文時(shí)才能靈活運(yùn)用。