Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是Jane, 請根據(jù)以下要點，寫一篇英語短文介紹一下你的家人，50詞左右。

要點：(1)家庭成員；(2)年齡；(3)職業(yè)；(4)正在做的事情。

There are ________ people in my family. ________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】There are three people in my family.

They are my father, my mother and I. I'm fourteen years old. I'm a student. I'm doing my homework now. My father is thirtyseven years old. He is a doctor. He is watching TV now. My mother is thirtyseven years old, too. She is a worker. She is doing housework now.

I love my family!

【解析】

本文屬于話題作文，介紹一下你的家人。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。

亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如there be, fourteen years old, be doing, do my homework, now, too等。增強邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。