Question

【題目】你有沒有因為沒能好好管理時間而影響了學(xué)習(xí)的經(jīng)歷?請你寫一篇文章談?wù)勥@件事及你的看法。

內(nèi)容包括：1.你沒完成學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)的經(jīng)歷（事情，原因及后果）；2.針對如何管理好時間給出幾點建議。

作文要求：1.短文須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名和地名。

3.詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.

I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.

How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。