Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文。

提示：

1. 鍛煉對(duì)于我們每個(gè)人都很重要。

2. 小學(xué)時(shí)，我不想鍛煉�？臻e時(shí)，我總喜歡呆在家里、教室里。一天，我病了，醫(yī)生告訴我要多鍛煉。

3. 現(xiàn)在，我每天鍛煉至少一個(gè)小時(shí)。在學(xué)校我和同學(xué)打乒乓、跑步；周末和父母一起散步。我比以前更強(qiáng)壯、更高了，學(xué)習(xí)也比以前好了。

要求：

1. 用上所給要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文條理清楚、語(yǔ)句連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)70左右，短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Exercise is very important to us

Answer 1

【答案】Exercise is very important to us. When I was in primary school, I didn’t want to exercise. I liked to stay at home or in the classroom in my free time. One day, I was ill and the doctor told me to exercise more.

Now I exercise for at least one hour every day. I play ping-pong and run with my classmates in the school. On weekends I often go for a walk with my parents. I’m much stronger and taller than before. The most important is that I study better. I am very happy

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹鍛煉對(duì)于我們每個(gè)人都很重要。

結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：Exercise is……，When I was……，I liked to……，I play……，The most important is that……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。