Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

某英文報(bào)刊舉辦“民以食為天——健康飲食”的有獎(jiǎng)?wù)魑幕顒?dòng)，目的是使飲食的安全和健康受到越來(lái)越多的關(guān)注和重視。請(qǐng)你以“Eating healthily is____________”為題寫篇短文，為本次活投稿。

（要求）

1. 確定主題，說(shuō)明原因；

2. 圍繞主題，進(jìn)行敘述或闡述；

3. 詞數(shù)80-100。

（注意）

1. 補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題（參考詞語(yǔ)：helpful；important；meaningful等）；

2. 可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以闡述具體觀點(diǎn)；

3. 可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

4. 短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

5. 作文中不要出現(xiàn)考生和相關(guān)人物的真實(shí)校名和姓名。

Eating healthily is _______________

Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. I think_____________________

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Answer 1

【答案】例文

Eating healthily is important

Nowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. I think eating healthily is important to our health.

I have an uncle who worked as a computer engineer five years ago. He was so busy that he always went to work without breakfast and he often had fast food for lunch. Last year, he got serious illness and couldn't go to work any longer. He then told everyone around him to eat healthily and have meals on time every day. From this I know without health, we can't do things well.

In a word, a healthy diet can help us become stronger and stronger.

【解析】

題目解讀：細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，提取以下信息：根據(jù)參考詞語(yǔ)，確定文章主題，補(bǔ)全作文題目；圍繞“飲食健康”話題分層次展開論述，先介紹觀點(diǎn)再進(jìn)行論述，為夾敘夾議文；文章敘述以第一人稱為主，可以列舉身邊的人和事，這樣更有說(shuō)服力，能引起大家的重視。談?wù)撚^點(diǎn)可用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，講述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事例用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。