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學(xué)校來了一批美國交換生，班主任要求你向這些外國朋友們宣傳和介紹揚(yáng)州，請根據(jù)表格中的提示，以Beautiful Yangzhou 為題用英文寫出你的介紹內(nèi)容。

揚(yáng)州簡介	位于長江北岸，氣候宜人，城市干凈，交通便利。
揚(yáng)州特色	1. 揚(yáng)州園林風(fēng)格獨特 2. 揚(yáng)州美食聞名于世 3. 揚(yáng)州…
美好祝愿	…

 
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                            
                    

Answer 1

Beautiful Yangzhou
Hi, everybody! Welcome to Yangzhou. Now, l’d like to introduce this beautiful city to you.
Yangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in Jiangsu province. It’s popular in China not only because of it’s convenient traffic, but also the pleasant weather since it lies on the north bank of Yangzi River.
Yangzhou is also  famous for lots of own styles :  the gardens in Yangzhou are quite different from those in other places. Ge garden, He garden attract people all over the word .  the delicious food such as Yangzhou fried rice, Fuchun Baozi ,Lion head ( meat ball) are unforgettable if you test once, a lot of ancient buildings show that Yangzhou is also a city with long and cultural history .
If you want to know more about the city, Walk around and experience its beauty by yourselves. Wish you good luck and enjoy yourselves in Yangzhou!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹揚(yáng)州的短文。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。注意不要遺漏要點，注意文后要適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的感想。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配問題。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點評：做英語書面表達(dá)時，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改。