Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

健康對每個人都非常重要，請根據(jù)下面的提示，以How to Keep Healthy 為題，寫一篇80 詞左右的短文。要求語句通順，要點齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。以下關(guān)鍵詞必須用上:suchas,what'smore,in short

首先，有健康的飲食習(xí)慣; 不能不吃早餐上學(xué);飲食要有規(guī)律; 遠(yuǎn)離垃圾食品

其次，有足夠的睡眠;早睡早起，不熬夜

第三，多做運動.....(至少2 點)

其他保持健康的方法(至少1點)

How to Keep Healthy

It is very important for us to keep healthy. First, we need to______

Answer 1

【答案】How to Keep Healthy

It is very important for us to keep healthy. First, we need to have healthy eating habits. It is not good for our health to go to school without breakfast. And we should eat regularly. You’d better not eat anything half an hour before going to bed. Please keep away from junk food because t’s bad for our health. Second, it is important to sleep enough for everybody. So don’t stay up too late. Third, sports can make us stronger and healthier. We can play basketball with your friends when we are free. We can also go to the mountains with our family. Last but not the least, please smile to yourself every day.

If we can do these things, I believe we will have a healthy and happy life.

【解析】

這是一篇話題作文。本文所給內(nèi)容比較詳細(xì)，我們需要用正確的語言把這些所給的點表達(dá)出來。認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，提出建議，給出自己的觀點的，注意說話的語氣及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。本例文層次緊湊，采用總分總的格式，中間四部分分別說明了題中給出的要點。用first, second, third, last but not the least層次鮮明，邏輯性很強(qiáng)。因為文章是提出建議，所以范文中用了許多委婉的表達(dá)，如should ,You’d better等。