Question

2．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示發(fā)揮想象，寫一篇80詞左右的日記．注意要點(diǎn)完整，語法正確，上下文連貫，格式已經(jīng)給出，請(qǐng)不要寫出你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱，謝謝！
內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你和張莉是朋友、同桌，相處有好，你擅長(zhǎng)英語，她擅長(zhǎng)數(shù)學(xué)．
（2）昨天英語測(cè)試，她想抄襲，被你拒絕；想查字典，又被你阻止．她很生氣，你也很上心．
（3）你決定下周找她好好談?wù)勀銓?duì)這事的想法和觀點(diǎn)，并希望今后你們能夠互相幫助，共同進(jìn)步．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I hope we can help each other with English and maths and make progress together in the future我希望今后我們能夠互相幫助，共同進(jìn)步
hope后是省略that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
As students，we should try our best to learn all our subjects well．作為學(xué)生，我們應(yīng)該盡力學(xué)好課程．
try one's best to do sth 盡力做某事

解答 Zhang Li is my friend．She sits next to me．We get on well with each other．She is good at maths and I do well in English．（你和張莉是朋友、同桌，相處有好，你擅長(zhǎng)英語，她擅長(zhǎng)數(shù)學(xué)）
Yesterday we had an English exam．She couldn't spell any words correctly．She wanted to copy mine，but I refused her．After that，she wanted to look them up in her dictionary．I stopped her．She was very angry and argued with me．I felt so sad．（昨天英語測(cè)試，她想抄襲，被你拒絕；想查字典，又被你阻止．她很生氣，你也很傷心）
I think about this thing all the time．She should study hard to learn English well．She shouldn't cheat herself．After all，honesty is the most important．Next week，I will find a chance to talk about it with her．I hope we can help each other with English and maths and make progress together in the future．【高分句型一】As students，we should try our best to learn all our subjects well．【高分句型二】（你決定下周找她好好談?wù)勀銓?duì)這事的想法和觀點(diǎn)，并希望今后你們能夠互相幫助，共同進(jìn)步．）

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