Question

19．城市文明，你我有責(zé)．假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的李明，寫(xiě)一份倡議書(shū)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，描述不文明行為，并倡議同學(xué)們?cè)谛��?nèi)外講文明、守秩序（obey public rules），共創(chuàng)良好公共環(huán)境．

不文明行為	spit（吐痰）here and there play with public facilities（設(shè)備）
文明 行為	校內(nèi)	●教學(xué)樓：上下樓梯靠右行，不追逐打鬧 ●餐廳：排隊(duì)等候，安靜就餐 ●教室：不在課桌上亂畫(huà)
		校外●馬路上：…．． ●公園里：…

要求：1．所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．自擬至少兩點(diǎn)對(duì)校外文明的倡議．
3．文章不少于80詞，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
4．語(yǔ)句通順，字跡工整；
My dear friends，
Each of us has the duty to obey public rules．Let's say no to the bad behavior（行為）．
                                           
Finally，I'd like to say，the more efforts we make，the better public places we will have．
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
While we are enjoying ourselves in the park，remember not to pick flowers or leave our waste things there．
句中"While we are enjoying ourselves in the park"為時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，句中短語(yǔ)有：enjoy oneself 過(guò)得愉快；remember to do sth 記得去做某事．這句話意為：當(dāng)你在公園玩耍時(shí)，記得不要摘花或者在那兒留下垃圾．
高分句型二：
In short，the more efforts we make，the better public places we will have．
這句話使用了比較級(jí)的特殊用法"the more…the more…越…越…"．"in short"意為"總而言之"．這句話意為：總而言之，我們?cè)脚�力，我們的公共環(huán)境會(huì)越好．

解答 My dear friends，
Each of us has the duty to obey public rules．Let's say no to the bad behavior．（開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題）
Now，we can still see some people spit here and there．Sometimes，naughty children play with public facilities．Besides，a few people say bad words at each other．（不文明行為）I think each of us should do good things．At school，we should walk on the right-hand side of the stairs．Don't play on the stairs．In the dining hall，remember to stand in a line and wait for your turn．Be quiet when you eat．In the classroom，we must keep the desk clean．Don't draw on the desk．（校內(nèi)文明行為）
We need to obey public rules outside the school as well．When you cross the road，please wait for the green light．While we are enjoying ourselves in the park，remember not to pick flowers or leave our waste things there．【高分句型一】（校外文明行為）
In short，the more efforts we make，the better public places we will have．【高分句型二】（升華主題）
Li Ming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫(xiě)作文時(shí)要注意平時(shí)語(yǔ)言的積累，避免出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意條理清楚，語(yǔ)意通暢．