Question

假如你是于偉，請給你的美國朋友Frank寫一封email，向他介紹你參加過的或者熟悉的一次有趣的活動，例如：采摘、野餐、郊游、聚會、競賽、節(jié)日等等。內(nèi)容包括活動的時間、地點(diǎn)、人物、活動期間的所做、所見、所感，然后向你的筆友發(fā)出邀請，請他來參加暑期中的另一次活動。
要求：1. 郵件要包括以上要點(diǎn)，鼓勵適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是內(nèi)容連貫、生動有趣。
2.詞數(shù)100左右。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
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詞匯提示（僅供參考）：
strawberry（cherry，fig）-picking 草莓（櫻桃、無花果）采摘      ripe 成熟的
greenhouse 溫室     practice base 實(shí)踐基地      ladder 梯子，rope 繩子，tie 捆住

Answer 1

Dear Frank,
How’s everything going?
Last weekend, I went to climb a mountain with my best friends. We had a picnic by the side of the mountain.
We sat on the blanket we took and ate the food we bought. We lay on the grass,listening to music and singing together happily.The sky was blue,the air was fresh and the mountain was green. We enjoyed the beautiful nature happily. In the end,we took all the waste down the mountain.
Dear Frank! In this summer vacation,we plan to go fishing by the seaside. Would you like to join us? If you come, I’m sure you’ll love it and enjoy yourself. Waiting for your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Yu Wei

試題分析：這是一封于偉寫給美國朋友Frank的書信，信中介紹了上個周末，于偉和他的朋友去爬山而且還進(jìn)行了野炊，他們欣賞著美景，玩得很開心。然后向Frank發(fā)出邀請，請他來參加暑期中去海邊釣魚的活動。作文包含了所有要求，而且有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇作文寫得不錯，語句連貫，發(fā)揮得當(dāng)，而且還用到了幾個優(yōu)美的句子。例如：We sat on the blanket we took and ate the food we bought. 句中用到了定語從句。In the end,we took all the waste down the mountain.作者很有環(huán)保意識。If you come, I’m sure you’ll love it and enjoy yourself.句子結(jié)構(gòu)較復(fù)雜，但表達(dá)正確。這為作文增添了不少色彩。