Question

【題目】 以 The Changes in My Hometown為題，寫一篇80字左右的短文。

過(guò)去	1.生活貧困，房屋破舊； 2.污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地； 3.家庭成員多，父母負(fù)擔(dān)不起孩子的教育；
現(xiàn)在	1.生活改善，住房寬敞、明亮； 2.人人保護(hù)環(huán)境，城市干凈、現(xiàn)代 3.政府實(shí)行計(jì)劃生育來(lái)控制人口，孩子都能接受教育；
將來(lái)	請(qǐng)你展望家鄉(xiāng)的未來(lái)

The Changes in My Hometown

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】例文

The Changes in My Hometown

In the past, my hometown was very small. People lived a poor life. The houses were old and small. Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. There are many members in families, so parents can not afford their children’s education.

Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Everyone protect the environment, so the environment has become much better and the city is clean and modern. Our government has carried out the family planning policy to control the population. All children can accept education.

I'm sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

【解析】

1.題干解讀：本文是一篇命題作文，要求以“ The Changes in My Hometown為題”為題，根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，寫一篇短文，文中從三個(gè)方面來(lái)介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的變化：過(guò)去；現(xiàn)在；未來(lái)。首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)，然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作。