Question

【題目】書面表達

綠水青山才是金山銀山，我們的家鄉(xiāng)衢州經(jīng)過“五水共治”后，天更藍了，水更綠了，吸引了更多的外地游客來游玩。作為衢州的一員，我們該怎么做才能讓家鄉(xiāng)變得更美？請自擬題目寫一篇有關衢州環(huán)境保護方面的短文（80詞左右）。

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Answer 1

【答案】

As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How to protect our environment? For example, we can go to school on foot or by bike instead of taking a car. We had better use shopping baskets instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. We should use both sides of the paper when we write. Don’t use paper cups. At our school dinning room, use our own bowls and chopsticks instead of disposable ones. We can reuse the water and save the electricity. In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better. "There is only one earth", I hope everyone will protect our environment well.

【解析】

試題分析：是一篇利用信息提示寫作的話題作文。要求根據(jù)信息提示，以環(huán)境保護為話題，寫一篇短文。由于在要點中只給出了寫作的大致方向，需要自己發(fā)揮的地方較多。動筆前要圍繞要點組織材料，確定時態(tài)主要詞匯等問題。寫作中，應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。

寫作亮點：本文要點明確，語言精練。層次分明。不同要點英語使用的句式也不一樣。語言的表述符合語法的結構，復合句的使用，In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.起到畫龍點睛的作用，想大家發(fā)出保護環(huán)境的倡議。