Question

根據下面的提示，以“希望小學”為題寫一篇短文，詞數80詞左右。
1．中國農村許多孩子因窮困而失學。2．好心人捐款助學，創(chuàng)辦了希望小學。3．許多希望小學條件良好，有教學樓和漂亮的操場。4．希望更多的人來捐助希望小學，使更多的孩子受到良好的教育。
詞匯提示：Hope Primary School希望小學  poverty貧困  contributing money捐款  teaching condition教學條件
Hope Primary School
                                                                             
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                           

Answer 1

In the country of China, Many children can’t go to school because of poverty. But so many warmhearted people are helping them by contributing money. And with the money, they are building schools. Many of these schools have very good teaching conditions. In these schools you can find modern teaching buildings and a beautiful playground. The students in these schools study very hard and always do a good job. Because they all know that Hope School brought them the chance to go to school again. I hope more and more people will help the Hope School, and more and more children will be able to go to the first-class school.

試題分析：本文的寫作應分為四個層次，首先對創(chuàng)辦希望小學的原因進行闡述，可以根據提示中國農村許多孩子家境貧寒來寫原因；其次介紹很多熱心人士都慷慨地捐獻了他們的錢來資助創(chuàng)辦希望小學這一現(xiàn)象；再將所修建的希望小學校舍情況進行描寫；最后發(fā)表自己的倡議，倡議更多的人加入進來為希望小學出一份力，說明這樣做的意義。
【亮點說明】：本文不難寫，對于作文的寫作要注意詳略得當，本文中可以將中國教育的現(xiàn)狀和很多人捐錢來建學校這兩點進行略寫，將校舍的美麗環(huán)境進行詳細的描寫；對自己所發(fā)出的的倡議及這樣做的重大意思進行詳細的書寫。這樣文章就顯得詳略得當、相得益彰。同時寫的過程中注意運用平時經常使用的句型，經典的句式來表達自己的觀點。