Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

下表是希望工程在2006年西部某一省區(qū)所取得的成就。請你根據(jù)表中所給的信息寫一篇題為“Project Hope”的短文，字?jǐn)?shù)在50-60字左右。文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。要求行文連貫、通順、正確，語言表達(dá)清楚。

What Project Hope has done in a province in 2006
Money Project Hope has raised	28,593,346 yuan
Students it has helped	5036
Schools it has built	62
Books it has bought	3,452,141
Clothes it has given	5,000
People who have taken part	367,403

Project Hope

Project Hope has done many things in China. It has raised much money ----28,593,346 yuan.

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【答案】

Project Hope

Project Hope has done many things in China. It has raised much money ----28,593,346 yuan.The money has helped 5,036 students.The money has been used to build 62 schools.We use the money to buy 3,452,141books.We have given 5,000 clothes to the poor people.So far,367,403 people have taken part in the Project Hope Activity.

【解析】

試題分析：小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀表格里的內(nèi)容，需要注意語態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如The money has helped 5,036 students.The money has been used to build 62 schools.We use the money to buy 3,452,141books.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。