Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是Nancy，請以“Changes in my hometown”為題，介紹一下你家鄉(xiāng)的變化。

要點(diǎn)： 1. 這些年來，我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了很大的變化。

2. 我的家鄉(xiāng)過去是個(gè)安靜的小鎮(zhèn)。道路又窄又臟，到處是垃圾。人們住在又小又舊的房子里。人們只能靠步行或騎自行車出行。

3. 現(xiàn)在街道寬闊干凈，兩邊綠樹成蔭。人們已經(jīng)搬進(jìn)了新的公寓。人們出行靠公交車或打的。許多家庭甚至有了私家車。

4. 人們過上了舒適的生活。

要求：1. 短文應(yīng)包括要點(diǎn)中所給的信息；

2. 行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；

3. 字?jǐn)?shù)80詞左右。

Changes in My Hometown

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

There have been great changes in my hometown over the years./ Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years./ My hometown has changed a lot over the years.

My hometown used to be a quiet small town. The roads were narrow and dirty. There was rubbish everywhere. People lived in small old houses. People travelled/went around on foot or by bike.

Now the streets are wide and clean, with green trees on both sides. People have moved into new flats .People travel /go around by bus or taxi .Many families even have their own cars.

Now people are enjoying a comfortable life.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。