Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你是李華，是我校一位高二學(xué)生。最近你收到來(lái)自友好學(xué)校朋友Tom的邀請(qǐng)，請(qǐng)你下個(gè)周去他們學(xué)校參加文化交流活動(dòng)并介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)繪畫(huà)。但是你和其他高二學(xué)生一樣在忙于準(zhǔn)備期末考試，不得不謝絕他的邀請(qǐng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)給Tom用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封回信。

要點(diǎn)： 1. 謝絕Tom的邀請(qǐng)；

2. 說(shuō)明你的理由；

3. 推薦你的同學(xué)Mary參加，并說(shuō)明原因。

注意： 1．詞數(shù)為100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好(不計(jì)入你所寫(xiě)詞數(shù))。

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation. ________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

Thank you very much for your invitation.

I’d like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends, but I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t. The reason is that I, together with my classmates, am busy preparing myself for the coming final examination.

I bly recommend my friend Mary, who is the most suitable choice to take my place next week. She began to learn painting at an early age and has a good knowledge of traditional Chinese painting, which, combined with her active personality and perfect spoken English, will help make your activity a success.

Sorry again for any inconvenience caused by my absence.

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是考生非常熟悉的書(shū)信，首先要審好題，本文屬于半開(kāi)放性的作文，要點(diǎn)給的很模糊，要求考生有較多的個(gè)人發(fā)揮。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意使用高級(jí)的詞匯如recommend，inconvenience等。同時(shí)也要注意使用合適的連接詞，和高級(jí)句式如定語(yǔ)從句，狀語(yǔ)從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等等，讓文章更有層次。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。例如：I’d like to accept it and take this opportunity to introduce the traditional Chinese painting to foreign friends。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,讓文章更出彩。