Question

【題目】某英文網(wǎng)站正舉辦主題為“Independence”的征文活動。假如你是張華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿。短文必須結(jié)合你的親身經(jīng)歷，描述與獨立這一優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)相關的一件事情，并談談它給你帶來的影響及感受。

注意：①詞數(shù)：80～100；

②短文開頭僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數(shù)；

③文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名等相關信息。

短文開頭： I still remember．．

Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, most children, who are the only child in the family, are given too much love by their parents. It is because that they are protected from hardship and difficulties, they become less independent.

Last year my parents went on businessand I was the only one at home.I had to try to cook my own meals, do the dishes and do the housework. I realized that I was often taken care of by my parents and lacked independence. During the days without my parents, I learned to take care of myself and the importance of independence.

We should know the fact that no parents can keep a good company with their children for the whole life. Thus, parents should encourage their children to do whatever they can, so as to develop their abilities of independence.

【解析】

這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in the family，too much，be protected from，on business，at home，have to do，try to cook my own meals，do the dishes，do the housework，take care of，keep a good company with，the whole life，so as to等。而It is because that they are protected from hardship and difficulties, they become less independent./ I realized that I was often taken care of by my parents and lacked independence./Thus, parents should encourage their children to do whatever they can, so as to develop their abilities of independence.等多種復雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。