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2018年1月以來，瓊海市開始推廣使用共享單車，你對這一舉措有什么看法？請根據(jù)下面的表格提示內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，談?wù)劰蚕韱诬嚨睦�弊及使用共享單車的建議，以便在英語課上與同學們交流。

shared bikes	advantages: save energy, air pollution
	disadvantages: park in wrong places, bike accidents
	suggestions: follow the traffic rules, care for bikes, don’t bring home

要求：1. 語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；

2. 必須包含所給提示，但不要逐字翻譯，并做適當發(fā)揮；

3. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實人名、校名或地名；

4. 詞數(shù)80左右。(文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))

Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think …

What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?

Answer 1

【答案】Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?

【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。而As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes.等多種插入語句式的運用，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。