Question

【題目】情景作文

根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，以“How I’ve changed”為題，談?wù)勀愕某砷L變化。

My changes
	In the past	Now
Appearances	short, heavy, long hair	tall, strong, short hair, wear glasses
Personality	shy and quiet	active and outgoing
Hobby	watch TV, surf the Internet	play sports, communicate with parents

要求：意思表達(dá)清楚、連貫�？蛇m當(dāng)發(fā)揮，字?jǐn)?shù)60-80個(gè)詞。

注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。開頭已給出不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

How I’ve changed

Time goes by, I grow up every day. Of course I have changed a lot in the last few years. Now let me show you my changes.

Answer 1

【答案】

Time goes by, I grow up every day. Of course I have changed a lot in the last few years. Now let me show you my changes.I used to be short，heavy and have long hair. But now I am tall,strong and have short hair.Ialso wear glasses now. In the past, I was shy and quiet and often kept silently. now , I become active andoutgoing,and I have made many friends. I used to watch TV and surf the Internet , but now I often play sports and communicate with my parents.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是寫一篇以我的改變?yōu)樵掝}的書面表達(dá)，把自己的過去和現(xiàn)在作比較，在個(gè)人的外貌，性格特征和愛好等反面加以比較。介紹過去的個(gè)人情況用一般過去時(shí)，可用used to+動(dòng)詞原形這個(gè)句型，介紹變化后現(xiàn)在的情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注重語言結(jié)構(gòu)的通順和流暢，避免使用錯(cuò)誤的單詞，句子和時(shí)態(tài)。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文注重不同時(shí)態(tài)的使用，靈活的運(yùn)用一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，尤其注意used to+動(dòng)詞原形這個(gè)句型的正確使用，同時(shí)在寫作時(shí)把握了語言的連貫性和對(duì)比性，正確的使用不同的句型結(jié)構(gòu).