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16．最近，你班同學(xué)就"課間是否播放音樂"這個話題展開了討論．請你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，用英語寫一篇短文，陳述討論結(jié)果及個人的看法、建議．

大部分同學(xué)觀點(diǎn)	部分同學(xué)觀點(diǎn)	你的看法
1 使學(xué)生放松． 2為下一堂課做好準(zhǔn)備． 3能給大家?guī)�來快樂�?/TD>	1 時間太短，達(dá)不到預(yù)期的效果 2課間需要的是安靜．	…

注意：1文章必須包括表格中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
2文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3詞數(shù)：80-100個．
參考詞匯：expected （預(yù)期的） effect （效果）
Recently a discussion was held about whether music should be played during the break or not．The opinions are divided．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①What's more，②listening to music also③makes us feel happy再者，聽音樂讓我們感到開心．
①What's more再者．作為插入語．
②動名詞做主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)．
③make sb do sth讓某人做某事．
【高分句型二】
Besides，I①suggest choosing some music ②that is suitable for middle school students另外，我建議選擇一些適合初中生的音樂．
①suggest doing sth 建議做某事
②that作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，修飾music，that作為從句主語．

解答 Recently a discussion was held about whether music should be played during the break or not．The opinions are divided．Most of the students think that music should be played．Music can make us feel relaxed after hard study（使學(xué)生放松．）．Besides，this can help us get ready for the next class．（為下一堂課做好準(zhǔn)備）What's more，listening to music also makes us feel happy．【高分句型一】（能給大家?guī)�來快樂�?br />   However，other students don't think so．In their opinion，they can't get the expected effect from playing music，because the class break time is too short．（時間太短，達(dá)不到預(yù)期的效果）Also，students need a quiet study environment．（課間需要的是安靜）
   In my opinion，it is good to play some soft and peaceful music instead of loud music during the class break．In this way students can enjoy music as well as have a good rest．Besides，I suggest choosing some music that is suitable for middle school students．【高分句型二】（個人的看法、建議）

點(diǎn)評 寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理．