Question

11．某英文報舉辦"家鄉(xiāng)的變化"主題征文活動．請你根據(jù)下表提示，以"The Changes in My Hometown"為題，用英語寫一篇80字左右的短文．

過 去	1．生活貧困，房屋破舊． 2．污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地．
現(xiàn) 在	1．生活：住房寬敞、明亮；許多人有自己的汽車． 2．環(huán)境：山更綠，水更清，天更藍(lán)…
將 來	請你展望家鄉(xiāng)的未來．

注意：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)具體的地名，否則扣分．
2．字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右，標(biāo)題和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
3．要點(diǎn)完整，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，意思連貫．語句通順．書寫規(guī)范．
The Changes in My Hometown
In the past，my hometown was very small．                      

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
More and more people have bought their own computers，mobiles and even private cars!越來越多的人買了自己的電腦，手機(jī)甚至私家車．
比較級+and+比較級：越來越…
【高分句型二】
I will work hard ①to②make it more beautiful in the future將來我將會努力讓我的家鄉(xiāng)更美好．
①動詞不定式做目的狀語．
②make…+adj讓…怎樣．

解答 The Changes in My Hometown
In the past，my hometown was very small．People lived a poor life．The houses were old and small．（生活貧困，房屋破舊）Pollution was very serious，there was rubbish everywhere．（污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地．）The traffic was not convenient，so few visitors came here．（交通不便，游人很少）Now great changes have taken place in my hometown．The environment has become more beautiful．The mountain have turned greener，the rivers clearer and the sky bluer．（環(huán)境：山更綠，水更清，天更藍(lán)）There are trees，flowers and grass everywhere．People live a better life．Their houses are large and bright．More and more people have bought their own computers，mobiles and even private cars!【高分句型一】（生活：住房寬敞、明亮；許多人有自己的汽車）Every year，thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city．（游客增多）I feel satisfied with life in my hometown．I will work hard to make it more beautiful in the future．【高分句型二】（展望家鄉(xiāng)的未來）

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